Love Crime Scene - my own Korean drama

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I'm planning start writing my own Korean Drama! I've watched so many dramas by now that I'm probably an expert now! So today I'm going to release the First Episode of it. Have fun!!!
 

Episode 1 - the smell of blood and coffee

The coffee’s steam was the only thing moving in the interrogation room beside the clock, the tic-tac of each second sounded like a harmonic symphony. Yoo Joo Hee was holding the cup of coffee tightly, it looked like her life depended on that warm pottery piece, she was lost in thoughts when the door opened and the detective Seo Jong Hyeon came in, a murder case folder in his hands.

Detective Seo Jong Hyeon was the youngest detective in that area, just 23 years old, but he didn’t lack in knowledge, persistence and hardworking, what made him a target of admiration and jealousy. He stared at the woman inside the interrogation room, her tied hair was a bit messy, slim body, her young face was obscured by fear and tiredness and her eyes was looking at the coffee in front of her like it was the only important thing in the whole world.

Seo Jong Hyeon: Well… Yoo Joo Hee, 22 years old, housewife, no criminal file… You didn’t speak with the cops at the crime scene, actually you didn’t speak with anybody, but it has to change, I suggest you start talking or you are going to take a long vacation in the jail.

Yoo Joo Hee was about to go to pieces any minute, Seo Jong Hyeon was playing the bad cop to receive quick answers, but while she looked into his eyes the sorrow was the only thing there, Of course she wasn’t the assassin. When he was going to say something more comforting his partner came in, he was a bit overweight caused by his addiction to sweet things. Kim Cha Hyeok was always the good cop.

Kim Cha Hyeok: What have we got until now?

Seo Jong Hyeon: Miss. So Min Joon was going to tell me about last night, right?

Kim Cha Hyeok: That’s perfect! It will make things much easier.

Detective Min Hu inclined to Min Joon, his friendly smile was stamped in his face, encouraging her to speak.

Kim Cha Hyeok: So Miss Yoo Joo Hee, what happened?

Yoo Joo Hee took her hands of the cup of coffee and placed them in her lap, she closed her eyes and started describing everything she had seen in that terrible night.

Sunday nights were the worst, her husband used to get home completely drunk and violent, more than once he broke everything at his fingertips. In the last 2 years she normally stayed at her neighbor’s apartment and waited until her husband passes out drunk. That fateful night was not different.

She got home at 11:45 pm, the house was quiet and the lights were off, she came inside without making a single noise, she wouldn’t like to wake her husband. She was going to sleep in the sofa again when suddenly she stepped in some kind of liquid. What could be that? Vomit? Soju? Pee?

Yoo Joo Hee walked in the dark, knowing where every piece of furniture was placed, she got to the bathroom and turn on the lights. The floor and walls were coved in blood, she stepped back and felt on a blood puddle. Her hands and dress were coved by blood, that smell made her get dizzy easily and the sound of a female scream made her heart started pounding, then she realized that the terrifying scream was hers.

Seo Jong Hyeon: Just this? You didn’t see anyone at the crime scene or you didn’t hear anything?

Yoo Joo Hee: No…

Kim Cha Hyeok: Well, that’s not good at all.

Seo Jong Hyeon: Do you know someone that could want to harm him?

Yoo Joo Hee: No…

Seo Jong Hyeon: You are not helping yourself. You must give me something to work with, you must know something.

Yoo Joo Hee: Am I a suspect?

Seo Jong Hyeon: You are the main suspect, actually according to you the only one. Your alibi is weak, no sign of forced entry, and you were found at the crime scene covered in blood.

Yoo Joo Hee: But… - she looked terrorized by the idea – I didn’t kill him. I’m innocent. – a single taer dropped from her pale face.

Detective Seo Jong Hyeon passed his fingers through his hair, it would not be an easy case, actually a case with so much blood couldn’t be easy at all. She wasn’t the corrupt, he was sure about it, now the problem was going to find the real corrupt.

Kim Cha Hyeok: Don’t worry Miss Joo Hee, everything is going to be fine. Detective Jong Hyeon is the best detective in the whole Seoul. – he approached her to wisper loudly – He isn’t just good-looking and sexy, he is very capable too. – he winked.

Seo Jong Hyeon: Ok, stop now. – he breathes deeply – You can go Miss Joo Hee, we are going to keep in touch.

Kim Cha Hyeok: Let me show you the way.

Kim Cha Hyeok and Yoo Joo Hee walk through the corridors full of cops and criminals, she looks a bit scared while the cop is whistling a popular song. Cha Hyeok stops in the front door while Jong Hyeon goes down the stairs, when she almost reached the last stair step the detective Cha Hyeok calls her and start going down the stairs too.

Kim Cha Hyeok: Miss Joo Hee… - he tried to get back his breath – Do you have a lawyer?

Yoo Joo Hee: Do I need a lawyer? – she looks scared again.

Kim Cha Hyeok: It’s just a normal procedure, you need legal orientation.

Yoo Joo Hee: I don’t have a lawyer and I don’t have money to pay a good lawyer too.

Kim Cha Hyeok: Oh, that’s great!

Yoo Joo Hee: is it? – she looks confused.

Kim Cha Hyeok: Wait a second…

Detective Cha Hyeok starts looking into his pockets, from each pocket he took out a bar of chocolate, or a snack, then finally he found a personal card from a lawyer and hands it to her.

Yoo Joo Hee: Seo Jong Min?

Kim Cha Hyeok: Yes, he is a great lawyer and he is a public servant, so you don’t have to worry about money.

Yoo Joo Hee: Really?! Thank you! Thank you Detective Cha Hyeoh!Thank you very much!

Kim Cha Hyeok: Don’t worry, I’m an officer of the law, it’s my job help the society. – he opens a chocolate bar and start eating – Now go home. Go.

She bows and leave. Suddenly detective Seo Jong Hyeon appears behind detective Kim Cha Hyeok, scaring him, he jumps and hold his heart faking a heartattack. Jong Hyeon just give him a serious glare.

Kim Cha Hyeok: Are you trying to kill me? You know I have a weak heart.

Seo Jong Hyeon: What were you talking that took so long? She is involved in a murder, you can’t be nice with her.

Kim Cha Hyeok: I was just fulfilling my duties as an officer of the law. – he starts climbing the stairs.

Seo Jong Hyeon: What do you mean by that? – the detective give a suspicious look to his partner’s back.

Kim Cha Hyeok: I suggested her a public lawyer.

After saying this detective Chan Hyeok starts running the whole way up, while detective Jong Hyeon tries to understand what it mean. Then he realizes what it means, he looks desperate for a moment and them scream detective’s Chan Hyeok name with a dangerous look of anger and start chasing him.

Kim Cha Hyeok: Come on, don’t be like this. It’s not so bad! – he almost touched his friends back in a gesture of comforting, but detective Jong Hyeon look at him with a dangerous expression and he takes his hand back.

Seo Jong Hyeon: Why did you suggest my brother as a lawyer? He is going to make this case a nightmare case. You know him.

Detective Jong starts knocking his head in the keyboard of his computer, he looks desolated. Detective Cha Hyeok eats a bar of chocolate while looking at him with a funny expression on his face, suddenly a cell phone rings, it’s detective Jong Hyeon’s phone, he looks at the screen and see Yoo Joo Hee’s name.

Seo Jong Hyeon: Detective Jong Hyeon, what can…

The only sound coming out is someone crying and breathing deeply, he could almost touch her fear, it was almost solid through the line.

Yoo Joo Hee: Help me… help… - her voice was failing, her spirit was falling apart – It happened again. Help me.

In a dark corner Yoo Joo Hee is sat down, she can’t breath or believe what she is seeing, too much blood, she can’t stand that smell again, in her mind the smell of blood reminds her death. The cell phone drops from her hands, in the screen detective Jong Hyeon call. His voice a distant whisper asking where she is now. Hell, it’s where she is.

TO BE CONTINUED